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!!!
Member

since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

0 posted 2000-10-01 10:41 PM

A truly awe-inspiring scene
To mine own innocent eyes,
As the bright red sun sets
Into the darkened overcast skies.
The setting sun finally shines
Through a break in the clouds as i stare.
Glimmering like a bleeding crimson scar,
On the face of the darkened midnight-blue air.
The wonderous scene on me,
Finally takes its toll
As it brings these words from my head,
And leaves its image engraved in my soul.

-"There is an exception to EVERY rule."

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

1 posted 2000-10-01 11:57 PM

Hi !!!,

You trully have a magnificent piece here, unbeleiveable, wow I just love it really I do. Thank you so much for this scene in to the begining of night, I will be pondering this one for some time I just know it.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

!!!
Member

since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

2 posted 2000-10-02 12:44 PM

Hello Cerenity. Im so glad that you took the time to read, and comment on my work. Im doubly-glad that you enjoyed it so. Im also glad i finally got this out. I had wanted to write a poem titled "Strange Sunset", but i never knew exactly what i wanted to say...Untill today, when i saw a picture of a sunset on tv, and i thought to myself, "THATS IT!" Obviously you know what went on from there

Well Cerenity, thanks once again for takin time out to read my poem. Later.

[This message has been edited by !!! (edited 10-02-2000).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-10-02 07:19 AM

!!!, what a colorful way you have of writing.
I love you magnificent imagery.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

4 posted 2000-10-02 09:51 AM

beautiful imagery...
reminds me of a poem i read in hebrew...
the last line really gets me.
shira

!!!
Member

since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

5 posted 2000-10-02 05:23 PM

Kethry, i thank you for reading my poem, and im glad you enjoy my style of writing, and imagery.

Silentsky, its good that my poem reminds you of another poem you have read, and that you like the imagery in it as well.Thank you for reading.

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