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shadydaze
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0 posted 2000-10-02 12:44 PM


shadydaze,

I've edited out your post for two reasons which stem from a third. First, replacing profanity with asterisks doesn't remove the fact that it's profanity. Second, subjects which glorify violence go against the very premise Passions is based on. The reason I deleted the content instead of asking you to edit it, is because you've already stated that you're not a new member here at Passions. To me, that indicates that you should be aware of Passions guidelines and her spirit.

If you have any questions, email me at christopher@countlesshorizons.com

Christopher


[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-04-2000).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 2000-10-02 06:17 AM


Welcome to passions,
the chamberpot's in the corner ready for your every comfort. Hope you make yourself at home.
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Xeonox
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2 posted 2000-10-02 01:42 PM


Great work for the first post.   Welcome

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
3 posted 2000-10-02 03:52 PM


Great Job
I know this rage well
loved it
Blue

shadydaze
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since 2000-10-02
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4 posted 2000-10-02 05:27 PM


this poem is an expression of how at an earlier time in my life, i felt as if i were being taken advantage of and mistreated in every way. this is an outburst of a hardcore rebellion that was going on in my head at the time.
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