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Her Prize
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Her Prize |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
She shines just like a brilliant star Close to me yet oh so far Driving in her small white car She lifts my spirits how bazaar She is so elegant and so fair Draped in beautiful long black hair I do not know her I'm aware But take a risk I do so dare Tall in heart and short in stature From harm's reach is where I'll snatch her With loving arms is how I'll catch her Then keep her close and not dispatch her She melts my heart with soft brown eyes It is to her I tell no lies There's one thing now I realize I only want to be her prize G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This one was very intresting because you are talking about being won as a prize. Usually people take it offensively when they are being the "prize". But it sounds like you want it to be that way. But thats only my opinion. I thought it was really good though. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
G.A. Webb well, won as prize or sold at bazaar This bizarre piece is best by far. Be well Kethry |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hehe  It's great! Sometimes you should have some love and respect for you and realise that you are quite a catch yourself! Somebody who gets to be with you wins a great prize. Great thought and great job! Take Care! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I understand this prize stuff...you want to be her man, her lover...enjoyed reading this...James |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
ERIN: I've never been thought of as a "prize" and don't see how that is a bad thing. Thank you for your reply.  kethry: That was cute! Thanks!!! LM: I'll admit this isn't one of my better pieces, but it was a diversion from my normaly heavier works. Thank you for what you said. I only wish that I knew somebody that shared you oppinion. Thanks again! jmlee12345: You got it! That's exactly what I meant with this piece. Thank you! Sadly though, she didn't want this prize.  Oh well. Thanks again. Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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