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Noticing the Little things....
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Noticing the Little things.... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Touch my hand... Can you feel it? Look at my smile... Can you see it? Listen to my voice... Can you hear it? I think I'm in love... Could you tell it? No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
I love a poem that hits fast & leaves the reader alone to think....... this poem does that. Thanks for the read. TLS |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I like this one. Short but yet to a point. I like the way you asked the questions in it. Thanks for sharing it!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It's the little things that count the most. I love the way you write! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is awesome!!! I really enjoyed how in so few words you can describe your happiness.....beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Wish I felt it  Sometime I'm sure! lol...Great work. I need to come in here more often I think, except just to post one of my own Yours, Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hope he does.. good feelings and good vibes *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
the little things are what makes the difference.......good poem Greg |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I think I'm in love... Could you tell it? Yep Jon |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi, Your poem is filled with perfect, simple points. Can you taste it? I like it a lot! Vince "Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman |
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