Everynight......A tale of a lonely heart

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gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-09-29 08:12 PM

...Sitting
wondering...
chatting.....boring

....Still wondering...thinking
asking myself......why?
why?......home alone
...what to do
where to go...
I just want to find you

Sitting.....wondering
.....still home alone
Where are you
.....why don't you
just come home?

....Whoever you are
wherever you may be
....just curious if your
sitting....looking
....wondering about me.

[This message has been edited by gjam (edited 09-29-2000).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-09-29 09:20 PM

How many lonely nights there are, and I too have wondered, is there someone out there meant to be with me? And why can't we find eachother? Great thoughts.
Sandra

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-09-29 09:21 PM

I can relate!! And this can be construed different ways so it'll fit many possible stories.. Well done

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-30 01:59 PM

Wow I am amazed. I like this, the way you formatted it, your thoughts and most of all just the way you wrote it. I hope to see more like it.

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Cyndey
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 84
Arkansas

4 posted 2000-09-30 02:14 PM

I too have sat many nights just wondering if there was someone out there for me, wondering if our paths would ever cross... I thought the way you wrote your illustrated a very pensive nature of us. great job! I look forward to reading more of your work!

Cyndey

"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

5 posted 2000-09-30 03:04 PM

Cool poem...I feel like that a lot too...I like the way you wrote it..

Dark Star

boardman
Junior Member

since 2000-05-09

Posts 44

6 posted 2000-09-30 05:48 PM

Hi,

Boy did you hit a nerve on this one!
So, when did you take up mind reading?
You just about wrote down what I think every night. Oops!

Wonderful poem. Keep up the good work.

Vince

"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

7 posted 2000-09-30 06:59 PM

yeah I agree you've put it soooo true

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

8 posted 2000-09-30 11:43 PM

Thanks everyone for the replies....I was in here last night....reading some poems and this one came to me.....it is what I think of constantly...just decided to express it...glad you like it.....this one is written different from my usual style...
I have had no inspiration lately because the situation I constatly wrote about is over....I was glad to write this one....Greg

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

9 posted 2000-10-14 10:05 AM

Thanks everyone...i haven't wrote much lately...I need to get back to it...

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

10 posted 2001-02-14 07:28 PM

im still sitting and waiting..hehe
guess i need to consider pt. 2 hehe

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