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gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-09-15 01:44 AM

  What is the difference
they both look the same,
  one is from pleasure
one is from pain.

  I feel a difference
can you not tell,
  guess it is good,
I fake it that well.

  I can survive the day
but I struggle at night,
  what will it take
for things to go right?

  I love the sunshine
but also the rain,
  just proves how fast
everything can change.

  I hope it will change
maybe benefit me,
  but if not then again
my fake smile you will see.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-09-15 12:33 PM

sometimes even in the fake smile there is a real one that is just behind the screen and you don't even know it.I really loved this poem.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-15 12:51 PM

A beautiful poet as yourself having to fake a smile!!!Oh wow. This was a really good one too!!I enjoyed. Keep it up. And start smiling.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-09-16 03:28 AM

gjam,
Well you know what they say "if you can't make it fake it."

Glad you are able to fake it.

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

4 posted 2000-09-16 01:52 PM

Thanks everyone for your replies, glad you liked it....I really do smile alot...I am always smiling and trying to be happy...just always seem to be pleasing everyone else...it seems like the more you care about others feelings...they get so used to it they forget about yours....Greg

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

5 posted 2000-09-16 05:32 PM

I really liked this one! I too have had these experiences.

JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

6 posted 2000-09-17 12:32 PM

Perfect Greg...just like a TRUE romantic..

liked this alot....

Julie :)

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

7 posted 2000-09-17 04:25 PM

What a nice poem!

Fake smile... I can never deliver fake smiles even though sometimes it's really necessary

Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

8 posted 2000-09-26 12:14 PM

Thanks again everyone....I have been wearing my fake smile lately....it gets me through the day and keeps everyone around me happy....sometimes you just have to do it.....glad you liked it Greg

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

9 posted 2000-09-26 01:48 PM

Wow Greg.. did you just tell me you lost your insprashion.. and then I read this.. its really good... Don't worry there's a light at the end of every tunnel! Take care
You friend,
Michell

"You live you learn and life moves on"

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

10 posted 2000-09-27 01:31 AM

Thanks Michelle...this is one of the older ones I thought you already seen....but thanks....looking for yours soon

...Greg

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

11 posted 2000-09-27 07:47 PM

Wow, this one is great! It's so me, I can relate. Hee Hee I made a rhyme

lol LOVE ELMO <3

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

12 posted 2001-02-14 07:27 PM

Hey everyone,
I just come back in to see how everyone was, I haven't posted in awhile, but I sure appreciate everyones comments during my time of need.
Greg

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