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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Ulterior motives in your mind You must have what is mine Like a snake you slither through my back gate caring emotions you toss my way hoping I will let my guard down today Your intensions I do dread Like the flowers I must deadhead Mixed emotions in my head feelings???? I dread you will break the thread. Just going through some trying times and this place seems to be where all my feelings are understood.. and I can release them thanks Blue |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
well blue, are they ulterior? if so get rid of him. A true love is out there alive, while we play with another death. great poem, and yes they slither in our back door. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Yep Blubrdy....I know the feeling. It's enough to make you skeptical and cynical....but you just keep going, and keep your guard up. They slither in...and they can just slither right back out. This boy won't be bitten again. Loved it. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i like the way you use the snake as a enemy to you or a ex-friend. love the work and i want ot read more of it so don't stop writing. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
man blue you are soooooo good!!!! hoping i will let my guard down today..... whoa!! i felt that one big time. i wish more people would read this one. and i, personally, am glad that i am one who did. excellent. i feel your anger. i really do. get your vent on, girl!!! keep it up!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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