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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Why are you so blue? Why don't you have a clue? as to how deeply he loves you. What a mean streak he endures You call him stupid You show him rue and he only tries to impress you Just knowing you're his makes him live He constantly gives and gives wanting to please you His life has strifes He never gripes he's just happy your his wife to serve you is his station in life Your sharp tongue lashes out Would you rather see what its like in a time of drought He doesn't even pout You are his gold no matter what he's told He will continue to keep hold You are loved so deeply and you secretely desire another Who's tongue lashes out at you You don't have a clue do you? How sad some peoples lives are they can't see whats directly in front of them or don't appreciate what they have.How sad. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes is sad, this was my life, she had a sharp tongue for 20 years, and I endured. but no more. for over 3 years. and it's great, I have a life now. and seeking true love. love the idea kid, hate the pain. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
You have so ably described one of those one-sided relationships. Where "What if...?" has been replaced with "What could have been...." Where love has been shoved aside for bitterness. To all of those in these type relationships, whether you are the abused or the abuser: GET OUT!!! They will make you physically, mentally, morally, and spiritually ill. No one wins in this game...and that is what it becomes: A game. This umpire calls Time Out. Very well done....identified with it. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
that a good question why don't i have a clue that i'm not happy but still stay i'll have to think on that one. great work here also i love it and keep it up and thanks for making me think of myself for once. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh yes blue, it is rather tragic, is it not? so many people say oh you want kids, take mine... or yeah my husband he will deal with it yadayadayada... keep ventin hon, i like to read your anger, validates mine too somehow. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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