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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
just tell me that we haven't given up the large hiccup swimming in the storm that will erupt in my head the fear in my voice too dead my poor swollen face your fists will never replace tiny tears that trickle down my face for the world to see |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
oh !! this is sad good job blue |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I have spent my life teaching other people self-Defense, and a poem like this gets me going, start ducking kid, and get an equlizer, fight like a tiger holding on to your skin. Because it's your soul you lose to the world's sin. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
keep your head above the water and don't sink like me. for things will get better for you. best of luck and great work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow... this really hit me. i bear marks of fists for the world to see, it is my tears i hide. maybe i should switch!! more empathy maybe??? loving this one!! i will read more of your works. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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