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The Dark Side of the Moon
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The Dark Side of the Moon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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The Dark Side of the Moon Smoke rising temperatures heating up *cursing* words flying taking a drag giving a push and a lot of pull more flying words landing like punches on her, on him, on me darkness overcomes shadows cutting deep bleeding, staining the night air each parts rejoining the emptiness that deceived them leaving them limbo dancing to fear [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-29-2000).] |
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melroseg Junior Member
since 2000-09-29
Posts 16 |
Very nice. Sometimes a glimpse to the dark side is refreshing. I really like this poem. Melissa |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you...but I am thinking I shouldn't have used that one word..I forgot it's not allowed so I will change it now...*s Maureen |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i really liked the lina about staining the night air. it just caught me. nicely done. jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul Devil lover, time awaits you Now the party's over You're on your own -the eels |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Nice work indeed, so glad I stumbled across it! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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