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Over My Rainbow
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Over My Rainbow |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Distant land of happiness promised hope of nothing less. Ever seek elusive dream looking for the perfect scheme. Gold, it's said, for me awaits copper poured out as the bait. Love worth more than all the gold still I wait, lonely and cold. Rainbow beckons overhead I must go where I am led. Rain clouds hide beneath the hue can't predict what he will do. Love, the rainbow of my heart longs to come in from the dark. Must give love, or I will lose without love, I starve the muse... To anyone who reads this-If you have any ideas for a better way to wrap this up, please tell me. It feels slightly incomplete to me. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Catalina Nope I cant think of a better way to end this But I see you have out done yourself this is a great poem I loved it Bluebrdy |
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melroseg Junior Member
since 2000-09-29
Posts 16 |
I think you ended it perfectly. I like it, because I can relate to the way you feel. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"Love worth more than all the gold still I wait, lonely and cold." Love these lines, great writing! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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