My Heart - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #2

My Heart

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-09-28 11:06 PM

Here's my heart
upon this hook
dangling
at the end of my line
I cast it out
for you to love.

Will you nibble?
Will you bite?

As my heart bobbles
in the cool water
I wait with antipation
for
your tug

I wait and long
to catch your
love.

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

1 posted 2000-09-29 12:19 PM

Very creative....nice....i liked this...Greg

melroseg
Junior Member

since 2000-09-29

Posts 16

2 posted 2000-09-29 12:50 PM

I like it. I could feel the need and apprehension coming from your words.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2000-09-29 08:11 AM

Hi, well I see there is yet another person here that is living my life..Wow, amazing how the common thread is there for so many. I had never thought of putting it like this, great idea, great poem.
Sandra/cat..

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-09-29 01:38 PM

I like this one!!It was really creative.

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2000-09-29 01:49 PM

this is really sweet... keep it up...keep writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.