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Dark Poetry #2

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bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-09-26 10:43 PM

It is me
you must decieve
sinister mind
you have indeed

Always watching
over you shoulder
as if you're
waiting for some
huge boulder
to come rolling in
and crush you flat
Not trusting me because of
your own sins
Dont send me any fake grins

Do you want me here cause
Im so layed back
and tolerate you being so slack
Instead of giving you a well earned whack.

Do you keep me here
cause your love runs deep.
Or simply to fill some
personal need ????

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-09-26 10:59 PM

How about "Sinister Mind" it's sad but some love out of their own need. I enjoyed this.

Kathleen

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

2 posted 2000-09-27 05:44 AM

This is really profound, ... it scared me because I can relate....beth

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2000-09-27 12:10 PM

I liked this one. Reminds me of some experiences I've had as well.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-09-28 09:40 PM

Good questions posed here. I have a lot of those also. I like this one, it speaks to me.
(Thanks for the comments on mine

)
Sandra

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 09-28-2000).]

moshpit
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 143
cebu, philippines

5 posted 2000-09-29 09:17 AM

Not trusting me because of
your own sins

i like this line.. i used to have this problem of not trusting people.. since then it has cost me pain and misery.. thanx for the beautiful poem.

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