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Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
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0 posted 2000-09-28 09:58 AM


A Lonely Saga

How I wish I could fly away,
Send myself so far from today.
Make my misery end,
Have my heart and soul to mend.
To for once feel as if I had been completed,
And not feel by the Gods I have been cheated.
Will this Lonely Saga ever close?
Shall I always be moved only by the wind's blows?

Yet, I yearn to feel PASSION!
Nay, I do not want it to be just some passing Fashion!
Where I can be cast off, Pushed aside.
Nay, that is something I will not abide.
Will my Saga ever have a climax?
Will life forever feel like a TAX?
Forever climbing upward,
Only to fall downward?
Will this Lonely Saga ever close?
Shall I always be moved only by the wind's blows?

To feel forever alone, and have no love to call my own,
Will this to me be forever Unknown?




"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

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catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-09-28 01:25 PM


Cyndey, I'm sure it won't be forever like this.  You certainly summed up the lonliness perfectly here. Never give up!
Sandra

Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-09-28 05:12 PM


Sandra,
Thank you for your kind words!
Its always good that there is someone out there who knows and understands what others are going through... thank you again!  
Cyndey
and no, i'll never give up...not on Hope.

"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-09-28 06:06 PM


Cyndey I have felt like this for the longest time and it seems like it will go on forever...but it will not...wonderful things are happening to me now...I do not feel so lonely anymore...somewhere in this world there is someone just as lonely as you and desiring to meet someone like you...it will happen...it is happening to me right now...life is not only loneliness...life is also happiness...James
Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas
4 posted 2000-09-28 06:23 PM


Hey James!  
Thank you for your words of encouragement! They were well recieved! I do hope that my lonilness will end soon, because its a real drag y'know? LOL   I'm keeping my chin up, its all I can do!
Thank you again for reading my poem!

Cyndey

"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

firejerm
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
5 posted 2000-09-28 07:23 PM


HEY BABY!  This is so glum, surly you don't have this in your head that this is the way you're life is going to be.  However, it is very good...and actually, I can relate a lot    I'm glad we've become friends...we can share a lot of this stuff.  Keep up the good work  

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas
6 posted 2000-09-28 11:22 PM


Jeremy,
You know it means a lot to me that you took the time out to come and look over this for me! I'm glad you found it pleasing. But yes, I have been feeling kind of gloomy lately! It's the weather! hahaha   I'll snap back soon! Thank you again!
Many hugs,
Cyndey

"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

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