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Isis
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0 posted 2000-09-27 07:17 PM


Eyes spand time and space,
I see you, I feel you,
You feel the same,
Hearts always collide for me and you.

Did destiny draw us together?
Did destiny tear us apart?
Regretting past decisions,
Still painful in the heart.

Is that it?
We've already had our glimpses,
Our time in the sun?
Others still condemn you as an emotional pimp.

Chance meeting once more,
Do the sparks still fly?
Is that moment frozen in time and space,
Under a star studded sky?

The memories play a symphony in my head,
A gala performance almost daily,
Some peace in my Never Never,
Oh God please help me, please save me.

I've paid my dues,
Balanced the cheque book again,
When will it be my turn,
When will the restlessness end?

I muse because I have to,
It's as common to me as life and breath,
Music ain't so lyrical now,
Emotionally I'm tone deaf.

I muse because it's a part of me,
Longing for a loving world of my own,
Perhaps one day I shall reap the harvest,
Of all these feelings I have sown.



*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2000-09-27 07:22 PM


Isis,
     listen my friend. . . can you hear it?  The music. . . it's there. . .

You know that you will reap what you've sown here. . . it may not look like it. . . but you will. . . believe my kindred. . . believe. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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2 posted 2000-09-27 07:25 PM


I want to believe my kindred, but even the mighty Isis loses courage, faith and hope at times.  Thanks hon *hugs*
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



Sven
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3 posted 2000-09-27 07:28 PM


I know my friend. . . I know. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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4 posted 2000-09-27 07:32 PM


Thanks hon.

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
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Youngstown, ohio
5 posted 2000-09-27 10:44 PM


my soulmate
*hugs*  i know what you mean by this.  i know you know what i mean.  the words emotional pimp hit home.  when i see wanda in a few weeks, will the sparks fly, will the love still be the same???  or will it my eteral flame for her meeting nothing but a rain of sadness.  wow did i just right that??  that was deep.  i think i need to write another poem  =)  great work hun.  we will have more then glimpes.  i know it.  will it be with the one i think and pray with??  mabey not.  but we will have it.  great job my soulmate.  you have touched my heart.  
love you deeply
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2000-09-28 01:44 PM


Oh my, memories, and longings, and needs, and lonliness, all wrapped up together. I feel every bit of this, Isis. Beautiful poem, but sad. Hope things are better soon.
Sandra

Isis
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7 posted 2000-09-28 09:01 PM


Jess hon spot on, you understand the poem perfectly. We have to BELIEVE and HOPE that we do indeed find more than just glimpses.
Love you too my bro.

Cat thanks glad you understand my ramblings..
Isis



*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



Jesse Jaymz
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Youngstown, ohio
8 posted 2000-09-28 11:16 PM


hun
yes i do understand this perfectly.  i am living it same as you are.  just remember, no matter what we always have eachother.  and thank you for being my friend, my sis.
love you
jesse
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Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 09-29-2000).]

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