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Accepting your fate
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Accepting your fate |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Take a sip from this chalice, Wondering what secrecy it holds, Fluid of darkness fills your lungs cold, Gasp of air you ask no more, Accepting your fate evermore. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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VypEr New Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 6 |
Very well written...short but potent nonetheless... lol, a darker version of Alice's "drink me", perhaps? |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good one. I was just watching a movie not to long ago where a guy had to choose a cup to find his fate. It was really funny though. I dont know what I am talking about. Good work though!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice and dark..Maybe Anne Rice would let you do the preface to her next book? I like this better than her husbands poems..  catalinamoon |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Xeonox, great poem!! Can't wait to see more like that. There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
weird.. but really nice.. i like it. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
nice. definitely dark. i picture a silver chalice with a deep red drink. |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
what's in the cup? |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
Hail the Hemlock!! Deliver of Men from a world of parasitic trolls, sheeple and grass chewing cattle. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
You never cease to have me mesmorized by your writings... You are truly a profound individual. I know what's in the cup..but it's probably not the same as what is in yours......beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow, great one! I love the imagery, your work is so unique and wonderful! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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