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Sweet Candy Deception |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470
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So many nights I would lose myself in you escaping into the madness into your world so white and true. One more time a little bit thats all just one more little bump until a bump turns into a ball. Numb my mouth help me to forget numb my soul help me escape regret. Make my heart race faster faster I will run away to escape this unbearable pain I'll fix the problem another day. How many nights I've stared the face of death how many nights I thought I took my last breath. You're a demon I have conquered I no longer want to dance for you do not tempt me anymore with your seductive glance. I would rather feel this pain than look into your deceiving eyes your appearance represents purity but I know that it is an evil disguise... You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
good poem, nice writing --gin "There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Now this is a battle that MUST be fought. If indeed you are the speaker,...I send you strength. Terrific writing. Please be well. *Peace. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is a battle I fought many years ago..but the images of the nightmare are still vivid, as anyone who has experienced this same darkness will tell you...it is indeed a battle that has been conquered...beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Beth, You write so powerfully, A soul engulfed in battle, able to walk away victorious, battle scars yes but with renewed self confidence needed for future battles. WRITE ON! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
I too struggled with such a battle but it was not the Snow Storm that I struggled through, but it was the tree of life whose vines choked my throat, and whose dizzying fruit clonked me on the head. I had fallen from this tree and fell into the steaming dung heap. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I have a similar poem called War for your soul in this forum. I know what you felt. Great to see it in writing.  (btw, you are beautiful)Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
The local paper her in town is/will be putting out a 12 page article on methamphetamines. The commercial for it quoted that California produces over 90% of the meth in the country. The valley I live in has been put on "crisis alert" due to the epedimic proportions of meth use and production here. It's really sad. A friend told me she was over at someone's house the other day. The woman, five months pregnant, was smoking off a crack pipe in front of her six-year-old daughter. The worst thing is that this isn't uncommon. Very good message here, very good. I'm glad you were able to conquer this demon. And if you look close, that color of purity is a lie. The closer you get to it, the more you realize it's more of a puke-yellow color. Not very pure at all. Peace, Chris |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Its nice when the spell is broken, and you can free yourself for another.. |
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