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DJLI
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0 posted 2000-09-27 08:35 PM


another day has come to an end,
not to different from so many others.
i went to school, came home, then went to work.
i saw the same poeple doing the same things they always do,
saying the same things they always say,
worrying about the same things they always worry about,
lieing the same lies as always,
feeling the same boring emotions as always.
i strongly believe life should be all about making yourself happy,
so why aren't i happy?
yeah, i have great friends i love to death,
and yeah, i have a good home life,
yeah, school is alright (for school)
and yeah, my job isn't that bad.
why do i feel like i'm missing out?
why do i feel like a part of me is somewhere else,
living another life?
i wish i could understand what i'm feeling.
like i should just get up and go,
find new people,
find a new life,
and find a new me.
i long for something,
anything.
i just wish i knew what it was



EVEN ANGELS FALL.

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1 posted 2000-09-27 10:52 PM


This my dear is a question for philosophy. Great work. I loved it.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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2 posted 2000-09-28 01:32 PM


Hi, I have felt like this so often. It's like something is missing or something is wrong, and you don't know what. With me, it always turns out to be about a relationship or love in some way.  But everyone is different. I hope you find your answers, if you do let me know!  Great work.
Sandra

Erin
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3 posted 2000-09-28 03:09 PM


I could be wrong but I am just taking a guess at this so dont take it the wrong way.

Sounds like to me that you are questioning yourself. That you have a part of you that is incomplete. Take some time to find what you are looking for. Eventually you will.

P.S.~~~Thanks for sharing this!!!


It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

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