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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I ask a million questions that irritate, I know, It's just we share so little and nothing of you shows. You touch me through your poetry that we share on the net. But passions you produce in me are enough to make me fret. It's not that I'm a stalker, it's just my curious mind I want to know what makes you tick, what treasures I could find If we could commence with talking and then move on from there I know we could communion deepen and find things to share. But if you keep your distance, as you have done before And only share your poetry you're closing up a door that I could use to meet you on a higher plane Instead I'm filled with regret it's sex and poetry again. It's just like sex and poetry on a winter's day I look for charm to keep me warm while spring is far away. Although I do not know them, a one night stand to fire all the secrets of my heart, and passions to aspire. The next day I'm alone and memories so sweet are all that's left to stay the bitter embered, dying heat So I read up on the poetry that enflames me once again And your presence moves my hand until, I forget the pain. It's only sex and poetry, it doesn't mean a thing It's just a hand, a one-night stand, an emotionless fling It's only sex and poetry over distance deep A way to get through the day and find a way to sleep. It's just like sex and poetry and loving plays no part So I'll take some string and reel in and wrap it round my heart You turn passion into poetry, remember if you could When the bird has flown and you're alone at least the poetry's good "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
WOW! OH...WOW!!! I really like this!! Touched a nerve with this one! Thank you for a thought I never had before..... Click |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Lynne....Intriguing thoughts, very lovely indeed! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Click glad you liked this, it was a poem written in anger. You can see it if you read between the lines. Rex thank-you for your comments. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kethry, this is so true, and so good! I am duly impressed  Write on.. cat... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Kethry, so well said hon! And then to take it further, they are those who get all confused by writings and don't see the truth, or see something that isn't there. It can be confusing all right. Well written hon!!  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cat, thank you I believe it is true, don't know about the good though. Isis, you are so spot on with your comment. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Kethry Another great write from you I read on this sleepless nite... Not much more to add in comments but if I may I ditto what ISIS has said. Thanks 4 sharing coco |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
CocoBaci, thanks for the Isis echo. sleep well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well hell... not much left to say .... but.. EXCELLENT work here. This has to be one of the best I have read in awhile. (oops guess I am not on much lately though either) But I still loved it!! Great job here.Peace DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Mmmm...wow. This is some good stuff here. Keep it comin'!! --Little Girl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like sex and I like poetry and this one is pretty good stuff...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
DkW, Thanks for your strong words of encouragement. little girl. Thank you so much. jmlee12345. So do I, although I haven't had much of the former, guess I'll just have to settle for good poetry. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kethry, You have said much here in this SO very PERFECT poem, im glad to hear that someone else has noticed this fact! please keep the awesome work coming (~.~) Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Nice combination  Kethry... loved this poem of yours! I'm in awe! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Cerenity for the "perfect". taramw. thanks, combinations are my speciality. Now how about 23 left, 10 right, 14 left. Isn't that a good combination.  Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wow Keth, this one rocks! (dont't know where that expression came from ), but as DKW says, there's not much left to add! So much emotion here, so much frustration too. Brilliant!Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Kethry, sex and poetry... I am waiting for JUdy Garland to appear and sing "a few of my favourite things" (sorry for the reference to The sound of music). Again I find myself relating alot, but sex and poetry is nice I perfer love and poetry... in the long run the sex tastes sweeter.. *wink* and that is all I am going to say. Loved the poem. The softest thing in the world Will overcome the hardest.Non-being can enter where there is no space". Taoist saying |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lotharingia, thanks you light up my life with your comments. Brian, thought you'd gone away. Now Judy Garland singing "my favourite things" would be sex and poetry. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it..great writing |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank you Victoria, I appreciate your comment. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Very well written, Kethry. I enjoyed it alot. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey! This is great! Very beautifully written, I like the flow and the whole idea behind it! I've read it days ago already, sorry for not replying then, I'm really short in time lately... Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
!!! and LM thanks for stopping by and commenting. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
you have many nods from me. i think its not just the poetry we're touched by but moreso the pain in ourselves. i liked it a lot, love shira |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Shira, thank you. It's always lovely when you stop by and read. But doesn't it take you away from real life. *winks* Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
I must say Keth,this really is one of the best poems I have read in a long time,you convey your message so clearly with this piece,well done,very well done. Regards. fool |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks for stopping by fool, and thanks for the comment. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Now I understand the preamble to your question... and the why of it. Great poem, Kethry. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Judy Garland Hey............umm........well Ok.......nice poem though. Jon |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
I enjoyed reading your poem, and thought it was wonderfully written. I can relate to your words also, and saw such vision within them. Great job! Its the first time I've read any of your work, and I'll be sure to watch for more! Thanks for sharing!! Cyndey "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Long John. Thanks Jon. Thanks for the compliment. Cyndey. Thanks for the kind words. I have been posting mostly on open recently. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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