Dark Poetry #2 |
Power of Love |
qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Ok, this one ain't even 5 min old yet so sowwie if it sux! POWER OF LOVE The power of love can be so great, but the real power's in showing it, before it's too late. Don't hide true feelings, in fear or embarassement, that will heal quicker than, their feeling of rejection. 'Cause if you cease to show feeling, the other ceases to feel, in thoughts of no feeling, which is harder to heal. Don't forget the little things, kissing, touching, holding. You won't regret the feeling it brings. Two hearts molding. Don't miss the opportunities, it may be your last. Take time to say "I love you", & if a feeling arouses, don't just let it pass. So do your part, & you'll receive it back. Love with your entire heart, instead of only half! ~Love may not last forever, & either does life. So tell someone that you care, be a friend, your family, stranger, lover, or your wife!~ I CARE, LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great work. I enjoyed it. It does not suck Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
LOL Thanx LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow Elmo this was really good!!! Don't forget the little things, kissing, touching, holding. You won't regret the feeling it brings. I like that part best!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe thanx Erin I just wrote this one today. I was driving home from school & it just came to mind LOVE ELMO <3 |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Keith always complains that I don't do any of this stuff so i decided to write about it & promise myself to try harder |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Wow, this poem touched me..i feel you completely....sometimes its too late, thats when you usually learn what your trying to get across...perfectly written..too bad I learned the hard way....hehe..Greg |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea thanx greg, i too have learned the hard way, unfortunately i never learned from my mistakes lol LOVE ELMO <3 |
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