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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-24 01:09 PM


THINKING OF YOU

Early morning as the sun starts to light the sky,
I am awakened & my 1st thoughts are of you.
At night I stare at the brightest star,
as I drift off to sleep, my last thoughts are of u.
You are my heaven, my whole world.
You have changed my whole life.
With you I see everything in a new light.
You keep a smile upon my face all day,
that will never fade away.
In the sky a star shines for you.
Almost as brightly as I do.
I promise to love you 'til the end of time.
All I ask is for you to be completely mine.
I walk to you with open arms,
as you scare away life's harms.
I have nothing to give, but love, hopes, & dreams.
Look into my eyes & see what this really means.
Search your heart, search your soul,
when you find me please search no more.
There's no love, like your love,
& no other could give me more love.
There's no where, unless you're there.
No where else to give more care.
I know this is worth trying for,
there's nothing else I could ever want more.
I would fight for you, I'd lie for you,
walk the wire, & even die for you!

I LOVE KEITH 4E

LOVE ELMO


© Copyright 2000 ¢¾ KT ¢¾ - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-24 02:32 PM


Elmo this was truely heartfelt and beautiful
Great Job
Blue

Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
2 posted 2000-09-24 03:25 PM


elmo.
*hugs and a kiss on the cheek*  this is exactly how i feel about my ex.  i told her that time and time again.  but she never seen it.  i wish i could go back and make her see my love.  mabey we would still be together.  *hugs*  thanks for this poem hun.  i loved it.
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-25 01:56 PM


Wow Elmo!!!This is the way I feel about my boyfriend. He is the best thing that happened to me.

There's no love, like your love,
& no other could give me more love.

I love that part. Sounds like you & your boyfriend are doing good now. Good way to say what you are feeling.


It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

4 posted 2000-09-25 02:10 PM


This is wonderful...makes me think of the things that I fail to tell my husband some times...I wish you well.
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

5 posted 2000-09-25 03:15 PM


OOohhh... it's so sweet... just the words I would really like to say to somebody... I hope Keith realises how lucky he is to have such a kind and sweet gf  
Take Care!



"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
6 posted 2000-09-27 07:43 PM


Awe thanx every1, glad you liked it. Yes Keith would be lucky to have me feel so strongly about him,that's if he ever felt it. We just got off the phone. Yet another fight about how I fail to show my feelings, the way I can't say why I'm with him, why I love him so much. Often he gets 3 words "I don't know". He hates that & it kills me. thanx again guys. LOVE ELMO  
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
7 posted 2000-09-28 12:19 PM


You know what Elmo??Keith shouldnt feel bad cause that is the same answer my boyfriend gets about anything that has to do with me getting personal. Because of the fact that I am scared of getting close to someone then getting hurt. If you ever wanna talk email me!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

gjam
Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85
Arkansas
8 posted 2000-09-28 01:26 AM


Does WOW mean anything to you...
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2000-09-28 06:00 AM


I like the title and lots of good loving words here....James
qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
10 posted 2000-09-28 07:37 PM


Awe thanx every1, & Erin that's excactly how i am. ive been hurt so many times b4 & so i wont allow myself to get close or let anyone in, keith hates it & its usually the reason we fight soo much it sux   LOVE ELMO <3
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