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Dark Poetry #2

My "God Poem

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

0 posted 2000-09-27 04:51 AM

My intentions have never been innocent
In anything I have endeavored to do.
For the sake of my game you call life
I have honestly lied to you.

I blew breath into your clay nostrils
Bringing your life to my game.
Then with each strategic movement
I’ve watched you grow insane.

I set up all my rules in opposition
To the freewill I gave to you.
You suffered in pain to follow them.
Then finally your faith was through.

So I told you to fear the beast
For he’s the cause of your pain.
Once more you believed in me
For now your sins had a name.

I’ve watched you climb from dark to light
But back to darkness you flew.
So I sent you my son to give you sight
And let you know that my game was through.

But to a cross you hung him up
And then you opened his vain.
My only guess is you weren’t ready yet
For an end to this foul reign.

So onto this world more pelages I released
With more pain and suffering, too.
I wanted to give you all eternal life
But now
The only one who can save you is you.

In these dark days you rally against me
And you call Satan up by name.
But from me he can’t save you
For He and I are the same.

Look deep inside for the soul knows
The truth and the fate of you.
But remember
My intentions are never innocent
In anything I endeavor to do.

[This message has been edited by jlocke (edited 09-28-2000).]

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-09-27 12:20 PM

HOT, HOT and HOT poem. I loved it. Every line I held it in my mind. I loved this lines.

But from me he can’t save you
For he and I are the same.

Great work!!!!!

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

2 posted 2000-09-28 01:48 PM

Thanx ... just thoughts that popped out of my head. Don't know that I agree with any of it, though.

Love is the law, love under will.

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