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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I want to laugh with you I want to cry with you I want to live with you I want to die with you I want to gaze into the sky With you I want to explore the reasons why With you I want to see the future and the past With you I want to make this precious moment last With you I want to take just one last chance With you I want to sing and I want to dance With you I want to find what life conceals With you I want to fall head over heels With you I want to walk into the fire With you I want to be lifted ever higher With you I want a love that’ll never tire With you I want all that I aspire With you I want to laugh with you I want to cry with you I want to live with you I want to die… With you G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I want you to have what you want hon. My fingers are always crossed for you *hugs* Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is gloriously written. I love it. Kathleen |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Gosh G,...this is just the coolest. 'With you',...*sigh*. Love how this reads. So neat. Take care you. *Peace. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Very well done. Easy to get caught up in, not easy to let go. |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
simple but really nice.. great work, GA Webb. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, exactly! How did you know just how I feel? This ia excellent. Shares that feeling perfectly. Take care. Sandra |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Isis: Thanks sweety, mine are crossed too! Glad you liked it! Take care.  Irish Rose: You have an interesting way of putting that, thank you! SpitFire: Hey you! Thanks so much! It must be good if I got a sigh out of ya...hehe! Thanks again and you take care too! seraphin: Thank you so much. Ya know, I felt the same way about it when I was done and had wondered if it would have the same effect on anybody else. I guess it did.  I'm glad you liked it. moshoit: Thanks dude! catalinamoon: I didn't really...lol! I'm glad to hear that you do have this feeling with someone. GO FOR IT!!! As for me, I'm afraid it was nothing more than wishfull thinking. I'm glad you liked it, thank you. Best of luck to you my friend and remember, Catalina is always here...lol! See ya! Thank you all again for your comments. I'm kinda proud of this piece and am thrilled that others like it as well. Take care all! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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