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Where's my love at? First poem in over 10 yrs.
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Where's my love at? First poem in over 10 yrs. |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas 
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At a loss for words from the pain I feel. Consumes my thoughts Is this what is real? Searching for someone who knows my pain. Someone who's looking, to smile again. A relationship here, A girlfriend there, it seems my heart gets crushed everywhere. I put up my wall to shield the pain, just to have it broke down again. Why can't a woman just be there, to make me smile, while I show her I care. So much love to give just so little time. Spend all my nights wondering? Where is mine? |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to Passions!!! This was amazing!!!I really do like it. Wow your first poem in ten years. You did a really good job letting your feelings out. I hope that I see more by you!!  ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
welcome. may you be inspired to write more often in the days to come. i only hope that sadness is not the only inspiration you will find. jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul Devil lover, time awaits you Now the party's over You're on your own -the eels |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
i undestand your feeling,,,,it is so scary facing ones own reallity,,keep writing and it will ease your pain...good work.. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Welcome to Dark Passions Tremendous poem!!! I hope you find someone special one day Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Kirsty New Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 8Australia |
Welcome to passions. What a poem as an entrance. This is something wonderful. I hope to read more from you soon. After 10 years of not writting, you made a great start to it again. Best wishes and keep safe Kirsty |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Where is mine". I don't know if you are at the place where you notice all the couples together in the supermarket, the mall, the park...and then you find yourself thinking where is mine...not an enjoyable place to be...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome to Passions. I have a feeling you will be on a roll now. |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Thanks everyone for your replies..to be honest this is my first poem I ever wrote out of feelings. The last time i wrote a poem it was for school. I had been down lately reading some poems everyone else wrote in here......It inspired me to try.....thanks everyone. Greg |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, welcome. I like this too. And have had that feeling many times. catalinamoon |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Welcome, I enjoyed reading your poem. "Where is mine?" I ask myself everyday, even though I found him... I think... he just didn't find me... so maybe I should search again. Thanks for sharing, take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Just reading this agin..thanks again everyone for your replies..i really enjoy reading your replies...i haven't posted anything lately...kind of lost my inspiration..got a couple wrote though..just haven't posted...take care |
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