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Ares Junior Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 11Berryville, Arkansas |
War War comes and war goes, Upon the fields where meadows grow, Armies from aboard march their toll, Through the summers heat and winters cold, The years that cannot be retold, While we all perish and grow old, Battles of sounds, War of sights, Tries havoc in our soul at nights. And during the days as we fight with our might. My mind is gone, While alone with no soul, Should one go on so alone. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I was hoping to read some more on this poem. Great stuff.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
excellent work Ares (the Greek god of War). This is an angle toward war I haven't viewed in ages. Good to see some variety on the subject. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
I agree good job tries havoc on our souls as we fight with all our might I always seem to be fighting. great Job Bluebrdy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
War! What is it good for? Absolutely nothing!! Great fresh projection of an age old subject. Join me, Gabrielle, Eve, Solan and Joxter instead of fighting... (Sorry couldn't resist it).  Great work *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
Tries havoc in our soul at nights. And during the days as we fight with our might. love this line.. |
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