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Dark Poetry #2

Ready for You

ilph
Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 78

0 posted 2000-09-25 06:43 PM

sometimes, but all too rare
when the light is right and dim
i can see myself without turning away
and you are there within

in those moments, all too few
my eyes reflect the truth
somewhere you are there for me
and i am ready for you

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-09-26 12:22 PM

Quite a personal poem you have here .Great work. I liked it.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

2 posted 2000-09-26 02:27 AM

I like it.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so.
B. Russell

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

3 posted 2000-09-26 02:33 AM

I liked it lots...
So simple, so perfect, so true.

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

4 posted 2000-09-26 03:42 AM

I like it as well.. It makes someone feel good to know that someone is indeed wateing out there for that one pearson!
Good Luck,
Michell

"You live you learn and life moves on"

moshpit
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 143
cebu, philippines

5 posted 2000-09-27 09:05 AM

AngelShell's right.. it is simple and honest.. and i like it.

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