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blondegirl10101
Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 16


0 posted 2000-09-22 06:24 PM


i come to see you,
you walk away.

i try to talk to you,
but you have nothing to say.

i tell you i love you,
has your love gone away?

i want you to hold me,
you push me away.

how does it feel? you ask.

it feels lonely.
it feels sad.
i am sorry i hurt you.
please don't be mad.
you are my desire.
you light up my fire.
please come back,
i know how it feels


to: lil ricky, i miss you!



kristin hahn

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DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
1 posted 2000-09-22 10:33 PM


hope things work out...positive vibes your way


EVEN ANGELS FALL.

bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-09-23 09:55 AM


Good luck girl
hang in there
good Job
on your piece
bluebrdy

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