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JSage
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since 2000-08-25
Posts 91
Nashua, NH USA

0 posted 2000-09-22 03:30 PM


Admission From an Angel Turned Sinner
by J.Sage  (8/3/2000)
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Lucifer laughs
And Jesus cries
At the mess that I've made
At the bed that I sleep in
And I made it
I know
Eternal slumber
Not far on days like these
Walking a bar
In my mind
Visually drinking
Until mentally drunk
To forget this
Oh so unintentional mess
That I've made
Until it blows away
If I make it that far
On days like this
I can only smile back
And hold back the tears
If there is a God
Let her know I'm sorry
And if Satan is real
At least he is proud




[This message has been edited by JSage (edited 09-22-2000).]

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DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
1 posted 2000-09-22 10:24 PM


this is so deep, and very heartfelt.  there's alot of emotion in this...beautifully done. keep it up

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-09-23 09:58 AM


Wow what emotion
great Job
I feel your pain here
I hope things get better

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