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DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA

0 posted 2000-09-21 10:10 PM


Its time to fly to the moon,
reach out your hand and touch the stars.
Worry of nothing,
for tonight is the night we'll rule the universe.  
Take my hand,
lets ride on the comets,
And visit fall off worlds.
We'll sprinkle ourselves in stardust,
and shine brighter than any sun in any sky.



EVEN ANGELS FALL.

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CrEaTuRe
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since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
1 posted 2000-09-22 12:14 PM


it's a wonderful piece ..... it made my mind wonder away for awhile  

*wished i had some of that stardust*


Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-22 01:38 AM


I want some of that stardust too!!! Thats if you are giving it away. You have a vivid imagination. I really like the idea of this poem. Keep them coming!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
3 posted 2000-09-22 06:19 AM


Oh I have this dream too
this was beautiful
I want to go to the moon
and to far off worlds
someone is very lucky
great poem
Bluebrdy

taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

4 posted 2000-09-22 07:55 AM


Woah! What a superb poem!!!!    Love the thought of it all!

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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