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Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

0 posted 2000-09-21 12:31 PM

               You made me smile;
                you made me cry
              You opened your heart
                  and your eyes
        You came to me with a simple thought
            You brightened my day with
                  a simple chat
            You said you felt alone
                Well so I do I..
             We opened our hearts;
            We both found a friend;
        Now I don't feel alone any more
           I hope he feels the same.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-21 03:34 PM

Just think of all the people that make us smile and all the people we make smile. If only that one smile could make a whole life alot happier there would be less pain. This was a really good poem, it was the title that caught my eye. Just think though if he could make you smile you are most likely making him smile too!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

2 posted 2000-09-21 04:38 PM

Thank you Erin..
Michell

"You live you learn and life moves on"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-09-21 04:48 PM

I like the beautiful message within this poem...hoping all those smiles are mutual...James

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

4 posted 2000-09-22 02:48 AM

Thank you very much!

"You live you learn and life moves on"

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

5 posted 2000-09-22 02:48 AM

Thank you very much!

"You live you learn and life moves on"

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

6 posted 2000-09-22 08:11 AM

I'm sure that he would - if you both have opened your hearts with friendship...

Lovely piece.

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

7 posted 2000-09-22 11:43 AM

I like this poem....must have met someone who needed your smile as much as you needed his

.......gjam

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

8 posted 2000-09-22 12:05 PM

gjam;
Yeah I'm guessing he needed a smile as much as I did, and I'm sure.. he felt the same. Metting new friends is a wounderful thing.
Michell

"You live you learn and life moves on"

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