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gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-09-21 06:24 AM

  It's the little things you say
that I love the best
  the way that you listen
when you should care less.

  The little wink that you give

or your trademark smile
  your XOXO...hugs and kisses
really drive me wild.

  Sometimes I can feel
your arms around me
  hugging my heart
I feel it indeed.

  I have poured out my pain
so fragile and pale
  I have have cried on your screen
you know me too well.

  You always come back
and you meet me again
  a true sign that someday
you could be more than a friend.

  Our pain brought us closer
our past made us stay
  both looking for a heart
that feels the same way.

  Just as I felt lost
and in need of a friend
  I found a FADED ROSE
whose brightened again

  I never seen your face
I know nothing of your smile
  But I know in my heart
your eyes will drive me wild.

  My heart beats for you
my thoughts you consume
  that hug that I promised
I will always save for you.

  Only fear that I have
is the distance in between
  hope someone else closer
doesn't change either dream.

  So when you are ready
just give me a call
  I will always be waiting
if you even call at all.

  If that day never comes
I will start my search again
  only reason I can do this
Is because we started out as friends......

For that I could never thank you enough....my princess

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-21 09:03 AM

Whoever you wrote this for must be really special. And I hope that one day you's will be more then friends. Keep up the good work!!!

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

2 posted 2000-09-21 12:09 PM

Well done Greg.. I hope one day you two get together and just hang out and get to know one another. Life is a stream that never ends, you meet new people and like goes on.
Michell

Night Chica
Junior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 39
Vermont

3 posted 2000-09-21 06:31 PM

Greg

It seems like you really care for this person. I hope everything you hope for with them turns out for the best. Good luck! Nice poem, by the way.

Megs

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-09-21 08:35 PM

Nice poem, beautiful sentiments. I hope all your dreams come true.
catalinamoon

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2000-09-22 08:22 AM

Ohhhh... such a beautiful poem... yes, she must be very special indeed! Wow, I hope you two get together one day...

Take care.

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

6 posted 2000-09-22 11:30 AM

Thanks everyone...she is just somebody who has helped me through some bad nights and really made me smile....nothing more now..but maybe someday...it was just my way of thanking her now that everything else settled...Glad you liked it

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