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EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2000-09-20 03:14 AM




Welcomed is that blinding light
That lightning flash of silver grey
Entering confused life, bringing peace
No comprehension yet of the impending end
Disintegrating into a thousand slivers of death
Tearing at flesh, probing the paths of destruction
Entering the cavernous recesses of my darkness
Destroying the nightmares and the pain
The blackness, it comes with a smile
A realisation that the end,
and relief, are near
Darkness comes,
and then
light

Firstly, Isis has asked me to mention that she has read and approved this prior to posting.

Secondly, appologies for not being around for a while, I've had been trying life in the sunshine for a while, but I'm back now, at least for a while.  




"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

© Copyright 2000 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved
JP
Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
1 posted 2000-09-25 03:27 AM


Hey, I'm just scrolling through the back pages picking poems at random to read... just my luck that the first one I came to was a good one and I had to tell you so.

Nice work.


Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so.
B. Russell

DeathTrippy
Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45
WY USA
2 posted 2000-09-25 12:26 PM


I like this one, and it's great work, but i can't quite describe what it is that makes me like it.  Oh well that is my inadequacy not yours.
a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

3 posted 2000-09-25 12:31 PM


Simpley...wonderful!!
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-09-25 09:45 PM


~Eagle,...so good to be reading you.  This comes to me both warm AND cold. It's cold but it's warm too,.....it's really well written, it speaks itself and just carries this tone. Thank you for sharing it. Take care E. *Peace.
EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2000-09-26 09:18 AM


JP.....I think you must have dug deep to drag this one out...

DeathTrippy.......Thankyou! I wouldn't call it an inadequacy, interpretation is an individual thing!

a-alibaster.....Thanks

SpitFire.......It's good to be able to write something again, Thankyou for reading!




"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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