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Dark Poetry #2

How I feel at 12:15 a.m.

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

0 posted 2000-09-24 03:24 AM

Frenetic thoughts
Roil inside
Upturning my world
Slicing my peace
To thoughtless shreds
Ragged and
Alien
Trite and
Endlessly, hopelessly
Defeated

Altruistic desires
Needlessly discarded
Giving way to
Rapacious
Yearnings

Hedonism's slave
Unbecoming of love
Rejected by his clan
Tossed by the wayside

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so.
B. Russell

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-09-24 07:25 PM

I hear you! The message within the message is loud and clear. Well done, JP.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-09-24 11:46 PM

You know what JP this is the way I feel at 6am in the morning, gawd I hate those early mornings

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

3 posted 2000-09-25 03:30 AM

Thanks all...

What's an acrostic BTW?

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so.
B. Russell

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2000-09-26 08:59 AM

An interesting read, I enjoyed!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

5 posted 2000-09-26 01:30 PM

Very nice. Well done.

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