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gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-09-19 11:55 PM

  There is a fine line
between love and lust,
  same line in your marriage
or divorced, it was a bust.

  How do you know the difference
between this side and that,
  make one mistake
and they never have you back.

  Better watch what you say
have to watch how you act
  if you act from your heart
you can't go wrong with that.

  So many tricky questions
it's the little things you do,
  better show them how you feel
while they're still with you.

[This message has been edited by gjam (edited 09-19-2000).]

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

1 posted 2000-09-22 12:14 PM

Wow! I know what you mean.... Great Pome!
Michell

"You live you learn and life moves on"

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-09-22 12:43 PM

thanks...glad you liked it

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-22 02:41 PM

Tell it like it is sounds like the message you are sending out. Or maybe telling someone something before its to late. I dont know I could take it as either way. This was a good way to express what you are trying to say. Thanks for sharing it.

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

4 posted 2000-09-23 11:53 PM

Great Job
and you have hit the nail on the head
very fine line
bravo bravo
Blue

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2000-09-24 12:28 PM

This poem is so true. I especially love this lines.

better show them how you feel
while they're still with you.

Great job!!

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

6 posted 2000-09-24 12:23 PM

Yep..its true....glad you liked it....Greg

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

7 posted 2000-09-24 03:31 PM

You know, centrally I suppose this is correct, however I've spoken from my heart and ended up dumped...it's a two way street, and it always will be, but you're best to go with your soul.

Jerm

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

8 posted 2000-09-24 04:41 PM

" Better watch what you say
  have to watch how you act
  if you act from your heart
  you can't go wrong with that."

Great one! I liked it a lot!
Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

9 posted 2000-09-24 09:32 PM

glad you liked that...thanks...i didn't think anyone would like it

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