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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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WHEN? Why am I always wrong? Why am I never right? Why am I always to blame, through each & every fight? Everything that I do, is never ever, good enough for you. You accuse, assume, & disagree, even when it's not my fault. When sometimes it's not just me. How can I make you see, I'm as truthful as, I can possibly be? When will you realize, I'm really a good girl, & there are no lies? Don't know if I can go long, if you think, I'm always wrong. So how long will it take? When will you wake? When will you see, me for me? ~I hid myself before, but now I wanna let you in my door!~ ELMO  |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Oh this one hits close to home for me too I hope things get better great piece of poetry here Bluebrdy |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea, thanx. I think it happens to a lot of people. All of us at some point of our life has some1 close who won't believe them. My boyfriend thinks just because the way i acted in highschool, he thinks i'm still doing it now, but i tottally changed LOVE ELMO <3 |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
 Sowwie just was experimenting  ROTFLMAO LOVE ELMO <3 |
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2shallow New Member
since 2000-09-20
Posts 3 |
I enjoyed reading your poem and look forward to seeing more. I am new to the forum and hope to post some poetry of my own. I have learned from reading and writing poetry than I ever expected and it has helped me through many of life's problems. Write for life! 2shallow |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea, same here Poetry is my voice, my life, without it I would of never made it this far! Welcome to Passions & i hope to see lots of writings from you thanx LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Elmo~~~This was truely amazing!!You seem to open yourself up alot in your work and thats why I like reading your work. You have talent. Keep it up!! If I were to relate to this it would be the other way around. I dont know why but this made me think of my boyfriend. *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
The only thing I can say is I admire your ability to mean what you say. Please don't stop. Writing can be fealt, heard, and alleviate pain, Aspirin was a miracle cure, but writing is a miracle. |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Very well spoken....why is love always so one sided....what ever happened to the middle....keep your head up...Greg |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Difficult thoughts expressed very well. Nicely done.  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
AWE Thanx again soo much for all the positive replys, I could never leave this place I get soo much love here. Like a second family! Personly I never really liked this poem, but its what i was thinkin at the time. It has a lot of loose ends i think. who knows. I always do that my feelings sound soo good in my head, but the minute they r put on paper they suck. i hate that but thanx every1 LOTS OF LOVE ELMO <3 |
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