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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-19 10:41 PM


WILL HE STAY?

I can see why he,
doesn't wanna be with me.
After all, now he knows,
why my door is often closed.
Is this how,
it will always be?
Will I find anyone,
who'll accept the real me?
Will I have to live my life a lie,
with everyone wondering why I always cry?
I told him too much,
& he got scared.
He told me that,
he always cared.
Eceryone wonders why I live behind,
this fake wall all the time.
I'm afraid everyone's gonna run away,
like he wants to,
though I wish he'd stay.
I can't make him,
it's just not fair.
I wish my past,
I didn't share.
So will he stay,
or will he leave?
All 'cause of my past,
he doesn't want to believe.

"If I gave you more than touches & kisses & granted all your wishes would you stay?"

~He gave me forgiveness, but he can't forget. I should've never told him & now I'll regret. The truth's just between us now & I can't take it back. I can't hide anymore, it's too late 4 that!~

ELMO
<3

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bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-19 11:38 PM


How tragic.
But I can relate
I've been on both ends of this stick
There is always forgiveness
as for trust and love
when its broken you must earn it back
its harder to earn it than it is to be given it
and sometimes these things just take time
Keep your head up
Love Bluebrdy

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-09-20 07:43 AM


Awww yes, thanx that's soo true   LOVE ELMO <3
LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

3 posted 2000-09-21 05:36 PM


Oh.. hon, I hope it's not about Keith...
I hope everything if alright there...
All the best, LM.

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-09-21 05:40 PM


The worst thing about growing close to someone and trusting them is that one day they might not be there. I have been through that stage so many times to the point where I know my boyfriend really does care but Im just to scared to get close in fear that it may happen again. Girl things always seem to get better with you 2 (as you make it seem). So I have a feeling that this will all pass. You expressed yourself beautifully. I hope to see more.

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
5 posted 2000-09-21 09:26 PM


AWE, Thanx guys, I never knew you cared so much (wipes a tear) Yea it was about Keith, but like always we worked everything out. I love him soo much & every fight we have brings us that much closer together (well our hearts, not the miles- we r still 300 miles apart   ) THANX for caring LOVE ELMO <3
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