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Is She, ME???
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Is She, ME??? |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Remember? The fire in my soul? The woman who wanted you, Even more than you wanted her! Remember the red hot lover she was The one who made your blood boil? The one who smelled so exotic and far away The woman who wore many costumes Just to please you, Just too Tease ONLY you! The woman who enjoyed it all The one who screamed with delight! And squirmed so hard under your fancy flight! The woman who has listened to your every insight Heard every whisper you had to say Took it all into to her like her last breath! The one who dreamed of so much more The one who wept when you walked away? Remember her? Remember the woman who would of given all To your beckon call? The one who adored your every glance And wanted you at every chance Remember that lady? I hope so she still remains She only wishes you felt the same But she is so unsure of your position So she remains in silent remission In this sad supposition As she once again ponders Is this really ME I hope you will see? [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 09-20-2000).] |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Wonderful work here I can relate to this poem so well remaining in remission giving it all just waiting great work Blue |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
"the one who adored your every glance and wanted you at every chance" beautiful...i understand this one way to much. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I enjoyed this poem very much. I appreciate the urgent desire at the beginning that finally dwindles into despondency at the end. Very well structured and written. If it's about you, I hope things work out!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Ouch... "Remember the woman who would of given all To your beckon call? The one who adored your every glance And wanted you at every chance" How familliar...  sigh....Hope everythign works out for you, it really touched me... All the best! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love the way you wrote this...James |
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