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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142


0 posted 2000-09-21 03:06 AM


- Trying to live-
apparently i didn't pass the test
not a person enjoys the rest
flowing from one to the other
we just don't discover
sure its a new world
its been growing haven't you heard
the south doesn't deserve
so far, a blurb
the winds they come from soemwhere else
the rains digfnify a preachers shelf
work down here is up for concern
if you've got a back they're concerned
the health means alot
but nobody challenges the cost
missed again is often phrased
to quote me " I love this place. "
when the stars, or clouds roam,
i send only my smile home
my best friend is a cat
my true friend smiles when she can
true friendship lives, and arguments fly
afraid of deception, a love tries

  J.L. Koehler

© Copyright 2000 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-22 06:32 AM


alright carolina I ve read this one about three times now
I like this piece
but I really dont know how to reply
But I do like it
Bluebrdy

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-09-22 07:48 AM


I like this one  

"when the stars, or clouds roam,
i send only my smile home"

Terrific!

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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