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anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 284
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0 posted 2000-09-17 01:28 AM



ok although i posted this in another forum i felt like putting it in here...this one and another one i will be posting in a few min...please give insight on it..much appreciated

                          Step on board to feel the sun
                          there's something inside that'll make you run
                          sing your freedom song in a stir
                          the hypnotic waves will add to the lure

                          Like the child that is sugarless
                          forgotten bliss will rise into a hiss
                          we can walk upon the precious water
                          loud cheers and experience will be the coming of the daughter

                          the ocean floats outside of time
                          step to the boat to block out the whine
                          the ocean sings of tragic falls
                          step on the boat and you'll learn why we called

                          Our Mother has made her final entrance
                          dressed with stars and always tent-less
                          eccentric wind blows through our minds
                          pebbles are dropped for the first time

                          the sails are a sailing and we're ready to blow
                          this night of mystery has but one length to go
                          one night that would break off from previous death
                          leaves you with bliss and a loss of your breath

                          the ocean floats in other worlds
                          this is my boat that can give you pearls
                          the ocean sleeps in serenity
                          we should rest to fore now we are free


"'I am the the lizard king
I can do anything
I can make the earth stop in its tracks
I made the blue cars go away

© Copyright 2000 Alexei - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-09-17 09:16 PM


Beautiful!  Quite Morrisonish!    Look you know about the posting, you can post in the other forum then when it has had it's run there it is easy to email the moderator and ask them to move it to dark for you.  Please do that in the future K?
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



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