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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I've been cursed A misled youth Since my birth What could be Worse No one understands And wants to Know The coldness I feel Wading through The snow. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
sad and cold...but like before, always beautiful. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice work. This is one of those poems from which everyone gets something different. I see this as being a representation of what youth often went through in the world wars. The state always mislead them into laying down their lives in horrible ways. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
We all know that cold place in the snow you refer to. What you have to do is find friends who do want to know how you feel, the sort that really care, like us here in Passions!! LOL Good work hon  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
In my small and occasional ventures here...I seem to have found you...were you hiding from me? < !signature--> I remember reading your work in Teen, and as always, it is wonderful. You have always had such a way with the truth that I admire. Keep it up my friend, I'm glad to see another from you...I've missed them.Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~  If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-17-2000).] |
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