Dark Poetry #2 |
finally, i know |
Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
why do i let myself fall for stupid guys who end up telling me they liked my best friend that he had never met? is it just teenage, hormonal stupidity? i hope so becuase the way i feel right now is not good... < !signature-->~Finally, I know~ i can't believe i trusted you with all the **** you put me through i wanted to know and now i don't because knowing is pain and knowing is strain you made me stop thinking your stole my heart away i know it wasn't love but it could be someday i'm not feeling well now i'd like for you to leave mind starts to wander sad thoughts i do concieve you could have told me this before but instead you've drawn it out i'm hurt inside but healed a bit because now i know but i feel like **** you should have told me i should have known the jealousy kills my love and light has now been shown. Nikolette Sadness I HATE ALL MEN! i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. [This message has been edited by Nikolette Sadness (edited 09-17-2000).] |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
I like your poem...don't hate all men...we are not all the same..Im down on women but got to try again.....Hope it gets better soon...Greg |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh yeah... man are disquasting animals... except for one and he's not available... And if I find out he's not all that I don't know what I'll do! Sorry you feel bad now but you have to understand that they are really stupid! I even got a theory that when god created a woman , he took man's brain instead of a rib as it was mentioned in the bible! So we just have to accept that they are like that, and train them to be the perfect men we want them to be! Take Care hon! < !signature--> "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" [This message has been edited by LM (edited 09-17-2000).] |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I liked this one. I wouldn't hate all men, though. But I do understand that it is extremely easy to stereotype when someone of a certain gender, race, or whatever puts you through "****". In my opinion, it is usually unwise to go "too fast" when entering a relationship. It is much better to act diplomatically, and try to be friendly... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Surprise i'm back on here for good cause i got my computer back. so i hope you cheer up some cause i'm here for you once again my friend. And don't feel so bad that girl i told you about that made me happy broke my heart. this is a great poem my friend and i hope to read more of your work and all that i missed. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
That is the worst thing about falling in love with someone. It happened to me. The guy that made me happy ended up hurting me for my best friend. And I never thought I would be able to trust a guy in that way again, but I do. I hope that all the pain and hate you are dealing with soon heals. *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hey hunny *hugs* you hate all men??? does that include me too??? =( i sure hope not hun. for i care alot about you babe and would hate to know that you hate me. =( great peice hun. full of emotion love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sometimes we feel like a mushroom in the dark as they feed us s... ha ha.. "There is a chord in every heart that has a sigh in it, if touched aright." - Marie Louse De La Ramee (1839-1908), English Writer |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
I WOULD agree with you if I hadn't met my boyfriend. But I did, and well, things are NOT the same. But just to comment...give men a chance. --Little Girl |
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