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The Death of my world
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The Death of my world |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
So much damage has been done you seem unwilling to fix it So much pain inside of me I must hide I must run holding it in as it devours my spirit Looking back remembering things that now make sense The death of my world Torn apart Not knowing how to restart. Lonliness,despair not able to care fighting the urge to crawl in my hole. trying to repair whats left of my soul Misery sets in trying not to cause you anymore pain Feeling betrayed wishing it would go away Wishing I could turn back the hands of time So many things you said you should have used your head It just happened (in all your places) No one to blame I don't know if I'll ever be the same grief depression and anger have set in... |
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glorybox Junior Member
since 2000-09-17
Posts 26 |
I would like to know what the other party feels when relationships end. We, the jilted, go through the entire array of emotions; we remember, we hurt, we scream, we cry, we think, yes, we think we might die; I always wonder what the other person might be thinking, because this, in your words, is what I feel. Take care. glorybox |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Such desolation and pain!!! Written well  ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Wow...this is some good work. --Little Girl |
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