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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
I wrote this about a year ago...before he left me...today is the anniversary of that day...my first day of purgatory... ~Too late for appologies~ sitting in the corner feeling sorry for myself half regretting what i did half not knowing what i felt sure that i love him commiting such a sin wanting just to tell him to tell him what i've done looking in the mirror seeing my bad side i don't want to see this from myself i cannot hide looking in his eyes so unknowing of my lies thinking of the things i've done these feelings make me numb telling him the truth how sins stole my youth the way i feel about him can't take away what's happened i love him so much he can't feel my touch he can't forgive me now i'll take a final bow life has left this place such sadness fills his face farewell to my love... i shall die for what i've done. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
aaw.....really sad poem Nik....makes me want to cry! hope your feeling better now... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
This is very sad and I understand try to keep your spirits up and not dwell on the past even though it is hard |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Wow...really good poem Nikol. Dark Star |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
VS...don't cry...i'm glad you like it tho! hehee Brdy...its very hard but i'm trying...thanx for the reply... Danni...i love ya man! hehe Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow... it's so amazing how your poems have this feeling... as if you wrote the first thing that was on your mind without even trying too hard, or not trying at all maybe... without thinking of rhymes and stuff... great! What did you do that was so bad? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I feel the regret...one time I was too late for apologies...no matter how much I apologized and promised to change she would not forgive me...a hard road to walk on...but I made it thru...still wish I would have loved her when I had the opportunity...to save me, her, and my sons, the heartache we went thru and the regrets I still feel today...James |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
whatever you did that you thought was bad, was surely made up for in this poem...well done with so much feeling. ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I know how you feel, this is a very good poem and i hope you are feeling better "There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
LM...thank you very much...but in all actuallity sometime i do have to try to write...but when i have alot of thoughts just running through my head i don't really have to try...it's as if thoughts just spew onto the paper...if you really want to know what i did then you can email me ok? jmlee...thats what its all about...regret...i used to think i would never do anything i would regret...but i did Dawn...i'm glad you liked the poem...but really nothing could make up for what i did...i don't think anything ever will... ginners...thank you...glad you liked it...but even though it's been a year i still don't feel any better... oh and just to let everyone know...he was in a car accident yesterday...no injuries...but i found it ironic...how, an exact year from the day he hurt me, this happend... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is another great poem from you my friend. i really enjoyed it but all things we regret are but lessons we learn. may my Havoc Soul rest with yours on this stormy night. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
That was an awesome poem, to think such sadness has gone your way. Sometimes we have to relive out past to move on with our lives.... Birdee.. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I hate thinking of my past cause it makes me feel as if I am still living in it. I hope that now things are going better for you. *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Trust me...you will NOT die for waht you did....just move on.... Julie :) |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
I cannot help but think how much heartbreak affects us all...but you seem to sum it up in one poem...well done. --Little Girl |
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