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Click
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0 posted 2000-08-29 09:58 PM



In the shadow of pain.
Your heart is not here with me.
Take me home once again.


Click


© Copyright 2000 Click - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-08-29 10:08 PM


Short, but it clicked alright.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

LM
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2 posted 2000-08-30 05:57 AM


Short and to the point, sort of a shout-out!
Take care!

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3 posted 2000-09-02 09:21 PM


Exactly..Don't you hate that it has to be that way?
Catalinamoon

kynder
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4 posted 2000-11-06 08:18 PM


pain, what a loyal friend.  excellent poem.  just like i like em, short and powerful.  always felt it don't take much to say what can be understood.  really, very good poem, click.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2000-11-07 12:07 PM


I loved this, shot but wonderful!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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