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Badnight (written after reading Catalinamoon's Incomplete dream)
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Badnight (written after reading Catalinamoon's Incomplete dream) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Badnight In my dream I began to think of a lost relationship. She had gone away not loving me enough to stay. She was my companion and my lover and at one time we just loved to hold each other. She was a sensual delight to embrace and hold all thru the silky night. And everything felt alright everytime she said "goodnight." If I listened closely I could hear her heartbeat and she would always whisper in my ear so soft and sweet. Sensuality was loving sexuality til suddenly she was gone from me. The relationship far gone from my sight. Heartbreak found me alone at night in misery yearning for her to be the one still lying next to me. trying to stop all this pain and crying desperately realizing I'm still all alone at night with no one to kiss and hold me tight and remembering the night she said her last goodnight and realizing if things get any worse this will definately be another one of those badnights. Jameslee@September14,2000 Thanksforinspiringme Catalinamoon. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Dang...a perfect description of a broken relationship. The pain is expressed well in this poem. --Little Girl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James, I'm not sure I want to inspire a bad night  Sad poem, and you know I know how you feel here. cat... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Little Girl and cat. Cat you couldn't have inspired it if I hadn't lived it...I will try to live a happier life in the future so my dreams will not be so bad...ha..ha..James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Jmlee, Sorry about the bad night, glad about the goood poem. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, I really like your dark writing. You always have a way of expressing your emotions so clearly. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Kethry and Marina...another of my regret poems...James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh, it aches... you've expressed the pain very well... K |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Severn I appreciate your concern..James |
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