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Depression's Light
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Depression's Light |
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meara Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 15 |
Depression Dark, overbearing Numbing pain, Dancing love Caring, feeling Safe and bright Passion |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
We all need that light and passion in our lives, and I find it here, great poem!! Take care, Olias. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Interesting transition you have here... I like the movement you achieved through such a short piece..  KThe wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This one is cool! I like how you've managed to transform something so dark into something so much brighter. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Meara, Okay, here's what I got from this poem. This is the way I feel. There's this depression and its berring down but theres always hope out there dancing like a faraway star that you can't reach, and that's fustrating, but still creates that thing to reach for, that hope. Great work. You really conved the message in only a few lines. Joy |
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