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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Beautiful one You have broken my soul. I thought I was aged, untouchably old. Your sweetness and love hold My heart on a shelf. The soft inspiration Your giving of self. |
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Lonesome Loser New Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 2 |
Your sweetness brings out my love.... Your Lonesome Loser |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Undeniably beautiful  ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
*sigh* this was simple and beautiful. i really liked the way it began. "beautiful one, you have broken my soul. *another sigh* jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwww YES so beautiful! I agree with Jannel *sigh* DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I like how you've made this poem short. Almost like you're at a loss for words, after witnessing an act that was thought to be impossible. I'm glad that you've found someone. |
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