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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Breathless I await you your touch of fire and rain. Barricades are falling It will never be the same. Breathlessly I hold you in nocturnal visions clear. Fantasies attainment, the day is drawing near. Breathless palpitations, a hunger for your kiss. Breathless contemplation the dream of future bliss. Breathless I await you, licentious man of fire, fingers burn to touch you, fulfill my mad desires... |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
WOW!!!!.....I love this poem.....very powerful....very strong feelings of desire in this one.....great job |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Whoooooha! Loved it! From the title to the mad desires! "Go on, go on, leave me breathless Tempt me, tease me 'Till I can't deny this Loving feeling Let me long for your kiss Go on, go on Yeah come on" The Corrs/ Breathless Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Got me thinking about kissing and touching now...James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Damn can I ever relate to this, never though I would be able to relate to a love poem...but there you go.... loved poem this very much, hot and tender... checking my calendar see how long I have to wait myself.  This is the hour when the mysteries emerge A strangeness so hard to reflect A moment so moving goes straight to your heart" JOy divison |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Swew... Cat.. This one is just HOT... LarBear |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
HHHHHHOOOOOOWWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLLING GREAT, AND HOT TO... But as you know I'm taken. hahaha love you kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Loved this one Sandra!!!!! Left me quite breathless indeed! lolTake care. ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Made me think about everything, every little touch, every little kiss.. Birdee |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cat this little piece certainly left me breathless.  be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi cat.... I've been so blind lately that I somehow missed this!! I'm glad I took a stroll through this forum.....this, my friend is extraordinaire!!!!!!! And the timing is perfect......straight from your heart.......Wonderful!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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SouthernSiren Junior Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 16 |
Beautifully erotic and temptingly demure. Truly a sensual piece. I loved it and the images it brought to mind. Take care, Jen |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Quite tempting and filled with a passionate fire, well done hon  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hi Cat! Errm, well, not much to add to all of that is there? Except that I * love * it. I can feel the excitement. I wonder if it's a real man or a dream man you're waiting for. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Breathless I await you, licentious man of fire, fingers burn to touch you, fulfill my mad desires... Whoa baby....think I will go take a cold shower now. Awesome work here....pulled me right into it...I LOVED IT! This is the kind of poetry you wish you had written yourself! This is a keeper. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hello all, Thanks for liking this, it has a big place in my heart right now. To Uta, Oh yeah, he is real, and in a few weeks I will see him. Look out for the poems after! Cat... |
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Night Chica Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 39Vermont |
Hoo-Boy! Your desire drips from every stanza in this poem...by the time you end it, it's like someone opened a floodgate!  Great poem...I think we've all had our moments where we felt like this...don't you agree? Megs I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived. -- Margaret Mitchell |
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