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The Glow |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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Im walking on edges. thin lines written on vast expanse of stolen time. I need to find my balance. don't fall girl, no safety net to catch your fallen angel complex. spread those wings, tarred and feathered, earthbound satellite. the universe would'nt look so bad from here if I'd open my eyes. deep rooted addiction to the nutrients lacking in barren soil. I wont let go of my melancholy because I'm just too afraid of the glow.< !signature--> "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 09-14-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I wont let go of my melancholy because I'm just too afraid of the glow Dawn, never be afraid to glow... Shine I know you can.. wonderful poem and I am sure one day that you will let yourself radiate.  This is the hour when the mysteries emerge A strangeness so hard to reflect A moment so moving goes straight to your heart" JOy divison |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
"fallen angel complex", "don't fall girl" I love these lines. I love the whole thing! I love the way you write!!! Keep em' coming. -Jes |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow...this really spoke to me, great stuff! "no safety net to catch your fallen angel complex" How did you come up with that? Loved it, I really understand it. All the best! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Brian: , you know they do say too much radiation can kill you! LOL...sorry, i do appreciate the uplifting comments thank you!Jes: well THANK YOU! you just made my day! now, i may just be blind, but havent seen any new work out by you lately, dont tellme you are holding out on us! LM: thank you, but dont ask me how i come up with those things....i just think its my lunatic twin coming out to play once in a while! LOL.....thanks again! "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dawn, this is a shining example of good poetry. I felt the rope, I felt the anxiety I even felt the deep desire that I could glow. *HUGS* Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Kethry: thank you so much for that wonderful comment! and especially thank you for the *hug*... ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Princess, This is so vivid! Gives me vertigo. I like it so much I can't say it. Afraid of the glow, attached to melacholy. Oh wow. Gasp! And so on ... Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is superb poetry. Afraid of the glow, great line. All of them are, actually. Take care. Catalinamoon |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
lotharingia and catalinamoon: you both are very kind! thank you so much! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
I'm not holding out. Ummm... I think I have 3 original posts in the adult forum and maybe 5 in dark passions, something like that. So, you could look for those. Other than that, maybe I'm a little shy. If you ever need a fix, Dawn, there's always my homepage. -Jes PS - You rock, Dawn. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Jes: oh you dont worry, i have spent much time on your webpage!...i rock? well.....i believe we may be poetic twins my dear! ~Dawn< !signature--> "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Be brave, be adventurous...let go of that melancholy and go for the gold...I mean the glow...enjoyed reading your words....James |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Dawn: Your pome left me breathless.. I fels as if I was on the rope.. Great work! Michell "You live you learn and life moves on" |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
james: thank you! i'll be sure to try! snowdwen: thank you! glad to leave you breathless! "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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