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For-never New Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 2 |
Till then.. ooh, yes I say.. hard is this..but next is now but fevor runs.. runs to late.. and I am bound bound to hate all I am is lost to you all I live is gone for now death to seek is all thats left heart enbound.. me...hell no Dead and wanted... dead yet weird dead yet haunted alive yet feared...... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
great first posting!!Welcome to passions and hope to hear more from you soon! luvz Virgin Suïcide... I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
welcome. i really liked your poem. the last line hit me in the stomach. so true. shira |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
 Welcome to Passions Nice choice for your first post. I cant wait to see more!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
welcome to passions...and nice first post...hope to see some more form you soon...  Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Welcome to passions! hope you'll enjoy your stay Nice and interesting piece, Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to passions!! Interesting format here, hope to see more soon *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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For-never New Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 2 |
Well, thanks for the responces, but, alas, I am not a new member..I just forgot my password to my previous handle, For_Never, thanks all, till then, Edward A. Beerman |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this a lot, though the death images are haunting. Great format, and style. Catalinamoon |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Well written, For-never. This is a really good poem. --Little Girl |
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